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Urban Abstraction #15 by DpressedSoul

:iconsierrareyna:
Really nice. At first, you see three main sections, the yellow, the metal grate, and the white ground. But as you continue to look each of those rectangular sections is further broken down into smaller and smaller rectangles. It really keeps your eye moving and this simple image from becoming flat and plain. The color is also a noteworthy aspect, I love it. This yellow is bright and unique giving the photo an modern life that plays off of the urban architecture and clean geometric lines. Very well done! My only criticism is the lighter yellow section at the top is a little unsymmetrical, but that's the buildings fault, not yours!
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:iconsierrareyna:
SIERRAREYNA Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
your very welcome!
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DpressedSoul Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much for taking the time to write a critique! :)

I am very glad that you like it so much, especially the color (because I usually do more black and white work). And the asymmetry is a bit of my fault as well, I didn't carry along my tripod and couldn't take as much care of the composition as I should have. I tried my best to adjust it in Photoshop.
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